Love the illustration dude but the type needs some work. I wouldnt stretch any of the charecters like oyu have with the s vertically. I would have the word set straight then just have it obscured as you can work out what it says. Or maybe use a typeface that bends easier. I would also put the pupil in both eyes.
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Love the illustration dude but the type needs some work. I wouldnt stretch any of the charecters like oyu have with the s vertically. I would have the word set straight then just have it obscured as you can work out what it says. Or maybe use a typeface that bends easier. I would also put the pupil in both eyes.
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